TITLESGOHERE
Francine, are you here?
Indeed I am. Good idea, this chat space.
Just wondered if you knew you could make corrections
resubmit your last line with "correction" in the e-mail address box
Cos um..your executioner line didn't scan too well, but never mind
could we do a haiku or two? a 5-7-5 syllabled stew.
I was thinking of haiku as well, not that I'm so great at it
Sounds good to me
Finish off green then
Can't until someone hits line ends stanza, like I'm doing now.
btw i'll try to be good and not add multiple lines anymore ;o)
good cuz that's defeating the whole purpose of spoonbill : )
well, as long as everyone plays the game right i'm happy
sorry guys gotta go...think up a good ending for my hippo!
does the word even count as 2 syllables?
I screwed up the meter again on the hippo poem
well, it's not always going to perfect - mine sure aren't
The correction advice Nyn gave wasn't specific, are you able to do it?
get a room
write corrected line as next line of poem, put correction in e-mail box
Or as they say, read the FAQ.
Contributors: | Nym, F, Karin, tonedeaf, Anon., Hagfish. |
Poem finished: | 19th July 2003. |