We Are More Free In Play
I'd like to haiku
Let's see if it develops
I would enjoy that
The joys of haiku
Are sweet and subtle (most times)
Delicate, harmless
So now we can count
Haiku can be so much more
Much, much, much, much, more
But there are more rules:
(Meant to be broken, of course)
(Not now; maybe soon)
What about seasons?
Spring, summer, fall, winter?...(nope...)
One should be implied
Mood: that's the ticket
Ah, yes, you are correct, sir
It takes some doing
Contributors: | Karin, F, Ethetran, Kansas Sam, quasi, Francine, Grayman. |
Poem finished: | 5th November 2003 by Ethetran. |